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Nick Winney's avatar

loved this! loved it!

great scene switching.

like a vegan version of THE THING.

Thanks EJ 🥰

EJ Trask's avatar

Nick thank you!! The vegan Thing has me cracking up. 🖤🖤

Jessica Maison's avatar

I am so glad someone did a story inspired by the Antartica stabbing over spoiling the end of a book. This story definitely made me thing of "All Summer in a Day" and "The Thing". Really enjoyed it!

EJ Trask's avatar

sub wins for me, the claustrophobia! I don’t think I could even write a submarine story.

Jessica Maison's avatar

yeah, subs do win. Definitely watch Iron Lung - you’ll be fine;)

EJ Trask's avatar

thanks! i’ve been obsessed with Antarctica lately!

Jessica Maison's avatar

I can never decide which is more terrifying - space station, Antartica research station, or deep sea submersible? Then I wanted Iron Lung and there was a whole new terror to worry about. Pretty sure I would stab someone for ruining the end of my book in any of these settings.

Patrick L. Parker's avatar

Nice! Echoes of John carpenter’s The Thing. Didn’t see that one coming. I’m learning things here.

EJ Trask's avatar

Thank you so much!

LiudmilaBrus1's avatar

I’m not the only one who fell under Antarctica’s charm

Paul R. Pace's avatar

This is a great read!

EJ Trask's avatar

thanks!

GrousyGirl's avatar

I really loved this!

EJ Trask's avatar

thank you!!

Ariadne Pautina's avatar

Loved how the story unfolded with the back and forth of developing story and aftermath.

So visual and evocative in the telling, too.

🖤

EJ Trask's avatar

thanks so much!

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

I thought it was Lovecraftian, then you pulled a switcheroo. Nice!!

Garen Marie's avatar

So much to love about this one, EJ. The Antarctic setting, the woo woo, the chef dreaming of green and finding a way to make it happen, the hardcore military man spinning a tale for his wife. Always a pleasure to read your work.

EJ Trask's avatar

Thanks Garen! this story did not want to be told, i’m so relieved it came together 😂

Garen Marie's avatar

Why are some stories like this?? For what it’s worth I couldn’t tell it was a struggle!

Sean Archer's avatar

Jordy Verrill must have sent his cousin Alfredo a care package.

Love it EJ!

EJ Trask's avatar

that’s a deep cut- I had to google it!

Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

But at least they have pizza! The perfect spring story. <3

EJ Trask's avatar

thank you for your help getting this one into the light

Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Always my pleasure.

Jenovia 🕸️'s avatar

This was so fun, I shivered. I LOVE Antarctica horror! 😍

MA Knight's avatar

Woo woo indeed