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Ah! I was not planning on starting out the morning with my heart racing! This is so good, and the claustrophobic anxiety is intense.

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Nicely done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

This is why I stopped drinking wine many years ago ๐Ÿ˜

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The wine wasn't the problem. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‚

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Oh my god...this is an adventure! Love the ending

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Mar 29Liked by EJ Trask

Turning the "it was just a dream" trope on its head! Ahhh, I loved this so much!

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I was so hoping it was a dream, and the stickiness of blood really got to me

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๐Ÿ˜ฌ I could not read fast enough!! The suspense was so good!!

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I felt my toes curl up in anticipation and made me wish my eyes could move faster to read this piece.

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incredible comment, thank you!!

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You write really well. I am glad to have found writers here like you.

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If I told you I was anxious the whole time, would you believe me? ๐Ÿ˜ญ Very, very well done. Glad I caught it on my feed first thing today!

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not only would I believe you, it would make my day ๐Ÿ˜‚

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Perfect... just perfect!

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Sooooo Cool! Completely enjoyed this piece!

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