Love it. I'm here much later, from the future, listening to a voice on my noise-cancelling headphones narrate this story to me. And you know what? It's kind of reassuring.
Wow, this was quite relatable since I had worked at a call center job before. This is psychologically sinister, I love it. Your writing is always good.
Damn...what an ending. This certainly reminds me of my job but, I do get to work from home. I'm not sure if that is better as the suffering wafts through my apartment during and after work--blurs the line between whose suffering is whose. On the bright side, to the best of my recollection, there is no donor class yoga listening orgy....although I wouldn't rule it out.
Oof. This is so, so sad. It definitely took a direction I wasn’t expecting.
Incredibly vivid, diabolical story, EJ. Just thankful David figured it out on day 1. Well done!
I was really not expecting the end. Genius, EJ!
Love it. I'm here much later, from the future, listening to a voice on my noise-cancelling headphones narrate this story to me. And you know what? It's kind of reassuring.
Serenity in the face of suffering is always so unnerving and your ending sent chills down my spine. 👏🏻👏🏻
An eerie twist at the end. I enjoyed it!
Sometimes I have to read it, walk away and think about it. This was one of those stories. The relaxation room really stuck with me. Great work.
Excellent writing! You captured the dreadful of working an office job perfectly.
thank you!
Wow, this was quite relatable since I had worked at a call center job before. This is psychologically sinister, I love it. Your writing is always good.
wow, thank you! that means a lot.
Well, that was extremely disturbing, but brilliant
Damn...what an ending. This certainly reminds me of my job but, I do get to work from home. I'm not sure if that is better as the suffering wafts through my apartment during and after work--blurs the line between whose suffering is whose. On the bright side, to the best of my recollection, there is no donor class yoga listening orgy....although I wouldn't rule it out.
can never completely rule out donor shenanigans
Very true. I will do an investigation next time I'm in the office and report back
Great twist and fantastic writing. I always look forward to your stories!
Oh, that’s wrenching! Great story that will stay with me…
Gripping as always! Great piece
thank you miguel!