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This was WILD! I really wasn't prepared for how this would hit me. At the end of my life, death will be a disappointment now that I've seen what it could be.

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im sorry for your awesome cowboy outlaw life and your totally metal death

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Gotta have a metal death or what's it all for?? haha

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So damn good. "Safe puddle of streetlight" is gonna be a phrase that sticks with me forever. Such awesome descriptions in here. Thanks for such a fun read :)

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May 5Liked by EJ Trask

oh.my.jesus. loved the energy of the landscape and how it intertwined with/was the story.

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May 12Liked by EJ Trask

The atmosphere here is just unmatched. You painted the scene so vividly I could taste it.

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You are soooo good!

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Loved this! The pacing had me on the edge of my seat. I'm scared to drive my car now

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An immersive story with a couple nice twists

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Ooooooo Im totally creeped out! Loved it!

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That was fun

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Wow heavy metal cowboy creepy

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May 5Liked by EJ Trask

Wow. Route 50 Roller Coaster of Dread. This one sent a shiver down my spine. Terrifying feeling of being trapped in a wide open space.

Well done, EJ!

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trapped in a wide open space…i’m going to use that

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May 5Liked by EJ Trask

Wow. Visceral. Terrifyingly good.

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Fantastic!

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Great story!

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I knew something was going to happen, but that twist still got me!

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Wow EJ you sure know how to murder a fellow substacker. I feel pity for Sean, but I suppose he should have known it was bound to happen, horror fans are a little twisted after all 😜.

Jokes aside, this was really good. I always looked forward to your stories

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