You know when in a movie, they transition the camera angle and zoom out or something dramatic and you experience what the character is feeling? That’s what “like on a boat” did in my mind. What a wonderfully written little treat.
Looooorrrddd. This one is terrifying! There are so many sentences that stuck out to me but the consonance in this one was so satisfying: “The sound hinted at its immensity, its malignancy.”
Very good... very, very good!
Why was Eleanor there? What happened?great unsatisfying story
hahaha very evil on my part
You know when in a movie, they transition the camera angle and zoom out or something dramatic and you experience what the character is feeling? That’s what “like on a boat” did in my mind. What a wonderfully written little treat.
Creepy. Suspenseful. Wonderful!
Scary, yet keeps you hooked. You wish to turn away, but you continue to read. Though, I doubt I will be able to sleep peacefully tonight.
Looooorrrddd. This one is terrifying! There are so many sentences that stuck out to me but the consonance in this one was so satisfying: “The sound hinted at its immensity, its malignancy.”
Yikes! This is so good.
Ah, the Bermuda triangle! I had my suspiciouns... I had a great interest in the Bermuda triangle when I was in my teens.
Thank you, a good story!🩶
You love Bermuda you should write more about the Bermuda Triangle! This one is s great start