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Miguel S.'s avatar

Holy shit. This made my skin crawl... ugh... so well done Ej!

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EJ Trask's avatar

you asked to be destroyed sir 😈

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Miguel S.'s avatar

You certainly delivered on that request haha.

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Colin Devonshire's avatar

I used to like spiders.

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EJ Trask's avatar

sorry about that!!

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Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

Jesus. Hahaha 🤌

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EJ Trask's avatar

😂

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Grim. Absolutely grim. Excellent nightmare, EJ.

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NJ Fiction's avatar

Gross!! Loved every second of it

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Bette Perkins's avatar

Yikes!!!! I hate that feeling that he can’t yell to them or scream or anything for help ! OMG TERRIFYING!!

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Aagh! I sort of love spiders, but this is horrifying! I’ve often thought that if spiders were even the size of kittens, they would rule the world. Incredible, very scary, creatures.

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EJ Trask's avatar

kittens!!! i’m going to erase that image from my brain now, thanks.

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

I once had a bug crawl into my ear while I was asleep and I had to go to the hospital because it bore into my ear canal. This brought back some crazy memories lol.

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EJ Trask's avatar

oh god that is a true nightmare

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Yes it was lol.

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Jon T's avatar

Brooding Beauty. 📶

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EJ Trask's avatar

this is such a good take 😂

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Keith Long's avatar

Oh. Oh… Oh, no…

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JD Russell's avatar

Great story! Had my skin itching the whole time.

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Zish's avatar

Omg

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Jessica W's avatar

So good. idk what to write because I’m still a bit queasy and spooked after reading this phenomenally dark tale. Up till now, I thought spiders are ok (they eat bugs, and I loathe bugs.) Your supernatural capacity to gradually build up the tension and an ominous sense of impending doom is unspeakably sharp. The tiny room crawling with spiders reminded me of Repulsion, a Catherine Deneuve film I can barely watch. The chills I got while I was reading started to send shivers down my skin like spider legs. But the eye?! No! This one is brutal and undeniably brilliant. I’m still going to hope they come back one day? Thank you for sharing this scary story filled with the surrealist fears that haunt the worst of nightmares.

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EJ Trask's avatar

oohh I have to see that movie

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𝐂𝐁 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐨𝐧's avatar

RIP Miguel! I'm sure your draft would've been a best seller. But now that EJ has killed you off, we will never know. Yikes! EJ, this is now the worst way to die.

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