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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Another killer story! You are on fire! The lifeguard is a minor god and she knows it.

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EJ Trask's avatar

a minor god! that is perfect.

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Shawn Brooks's avatar

Nice! Was worried something horrible was about to happen any minute. And that’s what I love most in stories.

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lauriemiller's avatar

This is hilarious and kind of true!

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Samira Hibbler's avatar

Loved the built up tension thinking the worse was about to happen. I loved how she was constantly counting everyone, hoping she wouldn't have to save someone from drowning that day. Also love the writing style.

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EJ Trask's avatar

thank you so much samira!

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Bryan Pirolli's avatar

Great character here. I was delightfully uncomfortable for the better part of it waiting for the worst...

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Carolyn Bedgood's avatar

I think I remember her from Kelly Rec, but then again, maybe not…

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Nick Winney's avatar

the tension in this was superb! excellent

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EJ Trask's avatar

thank you nick!

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Bette Perkins's avatar

Love love lover the lifeguard story, so good!!!

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