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4 hrs agoLiked by EJ Trask

This feels like several horror stories in one. 👏👏👏👏

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Oh. My. God. This was creeptastic! Terrifying! I need to know more about the pits. All I could imagine was some horrible giant ant-lion grabbing Earl or catching him when he slid down its trap (ant-lions have always sort of terrified me; thank god they’re small). Such a great story and a real, visceral scare!

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you leave the greatest comments! A giant ant lion has got me thinking…

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Superb evocation of time and place, EJ, really feel the thereness of it.

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🙏

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12 hrs agoLiked by EJ Trask

the pits, the swampy ditches full of twinkling gators’ eyes, the spanish moss, the humid air, the the the

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