Oh. My. God. This was creeptastic! Terrifying! I need to know more about the pits. All I could imagine was some horrible giant ant-lion grabbing Earl or catching him when he slid down its trap (ant-lions have always sort of terrified me; thank god they’re small). Such a great story and a real, visceral scare!
What a story! It was so real, so vivid. Was stressed out the whole time and could picture it like a movie. Thank you for that!!!
That was great, and very stylishly written. I could picture it all!
Spooky old mines !
This is stunning. Love the twist. This may be one of my all times fav from you. The narrator's voice is so lively, I feel like I know her.
this is deeply gratifying because I actually stepped back at one point and went “this reminds me of will” so, your influence is here!
damn, I am beyond honored to hear that…just made my week and the week just started
This was awesome EJ. I want to know more about how the radioactivity may have compromised that Bronco...
This feels like several horror stories in one. 👏👏👏👏
Oh. My. God. This was creeptastic! Terrifying! I need to know more about the pits. All I could imagine was some horrible giant ant-lion grabbing Earl or catching him when he slid down its trap (ant-lions have always sort of terrified me; thank god they’re small). Such a great story and a real, visceral scare!
you leave the greatest comments! A giant ant lion has got me thinking…
Superb evocation of time and place, EJ, really feel the thereness of it.
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the pits, the swampy ditches full of twinkling gators’ eyes, the spanish moss, the humid air, the the the